Once upon a time, there was a girl named Cecilia. When her mother died, the father married again. This new "mother" hated Cecilia. So one day Cecilia fled to the city, because the new stepmother was so mean. She found a small and empty cottage. It was so cute, but very untidy.
Cecilia cleaned up whole downstairs, but she didn't want to go upstairs. It was so dark and scary. When she was ready, she went out to look for some food.
Cecilia loves animals and she missed her cat. She remembered that, she forget her cat with her stepmother and didn't know what to do. She wasn't sure whether the cat is no longer alive. She didn't want to go back, but she has no choice.
Cecilia get back to home. Her father was wondered where hes daughter had been. Cecilia knows that if she tell everything about her fathers new spouse he did not believe her. So she lied. "I just wanted to be alone for a moment." She said and her daddy believed.
Next Cecilia search for her cat and went back to the empty cottage. When she came back it was already late. She heard sounds from upstairs. It was scary. But she was so tired that she fell a sleep.
"Who are you?" Someone asked her. Cecilia wakes up and seven little girl look at her.
"I'm Cecilia.." Cecilia said and girls smiled.
"Come eat breakfast with us." Someone said and Cecilia did it.
When Cecilia was ready, and her stomach was full she just fell asleep.
Little bit later Cecilia's cat licked her face, and she woke up. All those girls was gone and Cecilia and her cat lived happily ever after.
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ReplyDeleteThe text is understandable. The text is unique. In a sense that it's like the original story. The amount of text is enough for a fairy tale.
ReplyDeleteUse some pronouns. You can use some online grammar checker if you aren't sure about your grammar. Past tense should be in past form.
It is based from Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs, because of the seven girls